ket人作文老师：Dear Mrs

好的开始是好作文的一半

好的结局也是好作文的前提

结尾写得好

不仅能起到总结全文的作用

更能起到画龙点睛、提分的效果

有些学生在写作文的时候很容易在结尾做事情

这样的做法是错误的！

开头结尾都不能忽视

接下来和王老师一起来看看内容

首先，让我们来看看下面两篇作文

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

这两篇文章的区别主要体现在最后

①结尾更加亲切，丰富了文章内容

②它给人一种作文草率的感觉

这会影响老师对这篇作文的印象和感受！因此，在信件作文中，我们最好在最后添加可以改进和总结的问候和句子，以使作文内容更加丰富多彩。

王老师建议先自己训练，再参考范文！

训练 参照范文

Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon,

Mary

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