剑桥ket写作：Dear Mrs

好的开始是好作文的一半。

同一个好的结局也是好作文的前提。

结尾写得好

不仅可以起到总结全文的作用

更能起到画龙点睛、提分的作用。

所以开头和结尾都不可忽视。

下一步就和王老师一起来看看今天的内容吧？

①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

这两篇文章的区别主要表现在最后。

①结局更加亲切，也使文章内容更加丰富。

②给人一种作文草草的感觉。

会影响老师对这篇作文的印象和感受！所以在信件作文中，最好在最后加上问候和可以改进和总结的句子，这样作文内容才能更饱满，更有色彩。

训练 参照范文●●

Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon

Mary

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